Friday 11 May 2012
Raindrops ~
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Musical Raindrops ~
"Singing Sounds rytheme Dancing rock beats Ah !!ranindrops plays music " ~ Magnificent feelingsLoving Raindrops ~
"feelings for someone Raindrops plays melody of love " ~ glorious feelings
few lines from heart for :Tackle it tuesday
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Hello Anu, welcome in to the world of haiku. I understand that you're not so familiar with haiku, but you did well with these two haiku. You did write lovely images on 'raindrops', so keep on going.
I am glad that you've found the way to "Tackle it Tuesday", you're so welcome.
Hey Thanku so much ... nd welcome to my blog !!
Great you started off, good luck, and with this style you will rock Haiku world!
Hey thanks jaideep ...
Glad to see u here ..
Wonderful composition indeed!
If you keep “(Raindrops play)Melody of…” in the second line, it’ll be a beautiful 'haiku' as it should be in 5-7-5 or 3-5-3 syllable form:)
(And Rytheme or Rhythm?:))
Otherwise, it's really...really nice:)
Hey Thanks .. i m new to haiku world .. but i w'll try ... thanks for ur valuable comments ..
Thanks for joining my blog and commenting :) I'm a fan of rainy days and it is raining right now as we speak. Your poetry makes the day more enjoyable.
hey ur blog is very nice ... thanks
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