Different sh@des of my l!fe ...
Monday, 21 May 2012

Pine





Pine Treefooting long and straight 
Protecting all around us 
slot pine Minder for ever !!

       
oh ,In snowfall looks like cone
 waiting for bounce ,
pine stands tall as ever !!

  
with Skinny leaves in green color
pine tree with long neck 
spreading Stink in the air !!


few lines from heart for : Haiku-heights

5 Smiles ...:):

Tarun Mazumdar said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

great work there

Grace said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

I would think pines smell nice ~ Smiles ~

This is good but the poetry form is not haiku ~

Hope you don't mind the critique ~

Anu said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

@tarun : thanks dear ..
@Grace : hey Thanks grace .. yes definitely .i w'll try to do best ..

Jaideep said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Good lines Anu,.have a suggestion- do post the description of the haiku, it's always great to the poet insights :)

Green Speck said... Best Blogger Tips[Reply to comment]Best Blogger Templates

Nice lines....light and good :-)

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